Post by lightningwind on Jun 21, 2009 19:56:57 GMT -6
It was a warm, greenleaf day. The last of the leaves have turned into a bright, moist, green. The weather was surley beautiful that is. In the mist of Soulclan terretory lie Saidie in the nursery. Feeding her two, beautifull strong kits, Sorrelkit and Coalkit.
Saidie closed her eyes for a minute to enjoy the wonderfull weather. Her kits are growing strong, and the day was just perfect. She saw the large Sorrelkit squirm around for her mommy. Saidie let out a small Murrow of laughter and picked up sorrelkit with a struggle. Suddenly, saidie remembered her great times as a kit. She could almost remember almost evreything......
It was night. Or as her mother toled her, wich Saidie was born. She could remember something.... Like a nice, warm, fire. At just about a week old, saidie could remember
the twoleg kits yelling and screaming. She could remember them roughly fighting over them. It felt uncomfertable..... Like somebody tried to kill her. But for some reason. The older twolegs would bark at them and the twoleg kits would stop. Starclan bless them all.....
Then, saidie could remember when she saw her first sight. It was a little hard to see at first. But saidie could easily crawl around the big, soft room. Her mother would always pick her up and say, " Dont stray from me!" but Saidie would just go further and further... Untill she reached a big window. There, was Saidie's first sight outside! It was nice, warm, and full of life. Later that night, Saidie could remember her asking her mother what it was like outside the room. But her mother would just shake her big head and say, " Dont ask these questions! Outside is VERY dangerous!" saidie rememered feeling all empty inside and looking down at her paws.
Moons passed and Saidie remembered being in luxury. With fresh MEAT. The young twolegs would always pet her by the fire. Seasons passed. The green leaves turned into orange, yellow, and red. That was when things began to get wierder....
As the air got colder, different twolegs always came in the room, staring at Saidie and her littermates. One by one would each of her brothers and sisters go into the twoleg monsters. They diddn't even have a chance to say, " Goodbye." as leaf-bare came, Saidie was the only kit left. She felt all alone, without anybody to play with... Only her mother lay at her side, waiting for a nice home. At what seemed like moons came in a nice, warm, welcoming family. Saidie could remember the cute, twoleg kits race over to her and chirp with delight. Then, it was off to the nice, warm, monster, ready for her new home.
Saidie remembered a welcoming home. Everyone in the home was nice, sweet, and kind to saidie. They fed her milk. Saidie caught her own food and ate it in a corner. Life was nice and good again. Then, saidie had the urge to get out in the forest.... But that's a diffrent story.
Saidie yawned again and saw the nice, warm, sunlight beam on Sorrelkit as she tackled her brother. The small coalkit was no match for his big sister. Saidie got out of her dream mode and purred.
Sorrelkit screamed as she pinned down her weak brother.I got you now! Mewled Sorrelkit. She felt like queen of the nursery. The greatist warrior of the rest. " Muhahaha!!!!" Sorrelkit raced to her mommy for some more milk. It was very tasty! Then, sorrelkit began to harass her brother again.
Skykit padded twords the nursery after a long day of just having fun as a kit. Suddenly, she heard a scream. Maybye somebody was in big trouble! Skykit raced gfi the sound to see the little Coalkit being attacked by her big sister. " That kit is going to be a strong warrior...." sorrelkit was only 2 moons old and she was about the same size as skykit. Skykit sighed.... Who could be her real mother? Nobody claimed her.... She was motherless!!! Two hot tears raced down skykit's little cheeck as her little, tiny heart broke into pieces. no mother.... Cried Skykit.
Saidie heard Skykit weep and whisper to her. " don't worry! We'll fond your mother!" saidie felt very enthusiastic today and wanted to help others in need. It seemed good to herself. Saidie sat back and watched her beautifull kits. Those kits came from starclan that's for sure. They are little angels in disguise. Saidie made a loud purr that rumbled the entire nursery. The kits shook for a second, but Sorrelkit continued to harass her brother. Coalkit squealed in playfullness. This was truley a gift from Statclan....
word count: 804!!!!!
BEAT THAT MY FRIENDS!!!!
Saidie closed her eyes for a minute to enjoy the wonderfull weather. Her kits are growing strong, and the day was just perfect. She saw the large Sorrelkit squirm around for her mommy. Saidie let out a small Murrow of laughter and picked up sorrelkit with a struggle. Suddenly, saidie remembered her great times as a kit. She could almost remember almost evreything......
It was night. Or as her mother toled her, wich Saidie was born. She could remember something.... Like a nice, warm, fire. At just about a week old, saidie could remember
the twoleg kits yelling and screaming. She could remember them roughly fighting over them. It felt uncomfertable..... Like somebody tried to kill her. But for some reason. The older twolegs would bark at them and the twoleg kits would stop. Starclan bless them all.....
Then, saidie could remember when she saw her first sight. It was a little hard to see at first. But saidie could easily crawl around the big, soft room. Her mother would always pick her up and say, " Dont stray from me!" but Saidie would just go further and further... Untill she reached a big window. There, was Saidie's first sight outside! It was nice, warm, and full of life. Later that night, Saidie could remember her asking her mother what it was like outside the room. But her mother would just shake her big head and say, " Dont ask these questions! Outside is VERY dangerous!" saidie rememered feeling all empty inside and looking down at her paws.
Moons passed and Saidie remembered being in luxury. With fresh MEAT. The young twolegs would always pet her by the fire. Seasons passed. The green leaves turned into orange, yellow, and red. That was when things began to get wierder....
As the air got colder, different twolegs always came in the room, staring at Saidie and her littermates. One by one would each of her brothers and sisters go into the twoleg monsters. They diddn't even have a chance to say, " Goodbye." as leaf-bare came, Saidie was the only kit left. She felt all alone, without anybody to play with... Only her mother lay at her side, waiting for a nice home. At what seemed like moons came in a nice, warm, welcoming family. Saidie could remember the cute, twoleg kits race over to her and chirp with delight. Then, it was off to the nice, warm, monster, ready for her new home.
Saidie remembered a welcoming home. Everyone in the home was nice, sweet, and kind to saidie. They fed her milk. Saidie caught her own food and ate it in a corner. Life was nice and good again. Then, saidie had the urge to get out in the forest.... But that's a diffrent story.
Saidie yawned again and saw the nice, warm, sunlight beam on Sorrelkit as she tackled her brother. The small coalkit was no match for his big sister. Saidie got out of her dream mode and purred.
Sorrelkit screamed as she pinned down her weak brother.I got you now! Mewled Sorrelkit. She felt like queen of the nursery. The greatist warrior of the rest. " Muhahaha!!!!" Sorrelkit raced to her mommy for some more milk. It was very tasty! Then, sorrelkit began to harass her brother again.
Skykit padded twords the nursery after a long day of just having fun as a kit. Suddenly, she heard a scream. Maybye somebody was in big trouble! Skykit raced gfi the sound to see the little Coalkit being attacked by her big sister. " That kit is going to be a strong warrior...." sorrelkit was only 2 moons old and she was about the same size as skykit. Skykit sighed.... Who could be her real mother? Nobody claimed her.... She was motherless!!! Two hot tears raced down skykit's little cheeck as her little, tiny heart broke into pieces. no mother.... Cried Skykit.
Saidie heard Skykit weep and whisper to her. " don't worry! We'll fond your mother!" saidie felt very enthusiastic today and wanted to help others in need. It seemed good to herself. Saidie sat back and watched her beautifull kits. Those kits came from starclan that's for sure. They are little angels in disguise. Saidie made a loud purr that rumbled the entire nursery. The kits shook for a second, but Sorrelkit continued to harass her brother. Coalkit squealed in playfullness. This was truley a gift from Statclan....
word count: 804!!!!!
BEAT THAT MY FRIENDS!!!!
I need a life XD ))
because the word counts, counts all those huge spaces you put between the paragraphs and you arent supposed to RP your own kits rotfl HAHA XD! 
now, before you try to take my spot as Longest Poster, MAKE SURE YA READ THA RULES AND UNDERSTOOD THE GAME XD))
