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Windspirit's *Moonspirit* Poetry Feb 15, 2009 20:35:41 GMT -6

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Post by moonspirit on Feb 15, 2009 20:35:41 GMT -6

"Broken"
I'm so mad
I'm so depressed
Why the heck can't I give it a rest?

Time and time again
I try in vain
Why can't I just accept the pain?

I fight and kick
I push and shove
Why can't I just acknowledge this broken love?

But then after awhile
Comes the time
When I feel perfectly fine

"Dead"
Mistreated, defeated
So alone inside
Yet can't I find
Some place to confide?

I know I'm not perfect
I know I'm not well
I know I'm not nice
But seriously, what the hell?

You kick me
You shove me
You push me
You love me
What is wrong with you?

And then
As the emotions swirl through my head
I realize one thing
You are dead

~.:Whisper:.~ Co-Admin the wind whispers through the forest, calling my name Posts: 1,839	Windspirit's Moonspirit Poetry Feb 15, 2009 20:38:15 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ~.:Whisper:.~ on Feb 15, 2009 20:38:15 GMT -6 OMG I love the second one!!! "And then / As the emotions swirl through my head / I realize one thing / You are dead" AMAZING!! I <3 that line
	I am Whisperwind, a tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes I stay, to keep alive the memory of what once was. To make sure SoulClan is never forgotten, to honor the cats who are no more. If you are also dedicated to this cause, PM me.

moonspirit Guest	Windspirit's Moonspirit Poetry Feb 15, 2009 20:39:54 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by moonspirit on Feb 15, 2009 20:39:54 GMT -6 Aww, thanks so much!

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Windspirit's *Moonspirit* Poetry Feb 15, 2009 21:07:54 GMT -6

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Post by moonspirit on Feb 15, 2009 21:07:54 GMT -6

Regrets
As the moon rises
And the sun sets
There are no regrets

Such a perfect evening
Filled with joy and laughter
I almost remember
'Happily ever after'

But no
Not with all this poverty
And death and sorrow
I just can't wait 'till tomorrow

Filled with hope
And excitement
I just can't hold back
My enlightment

For you see
As a new sun rises
A new day begins
For me

~.:Whisper:.~
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the wind whispers through the forest, calling my name

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Windspirit's *Moonspirit* Poetry Feb 15, 2009 21:19:29 GMT -6

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Post by ~.:Whisper:.~ on Feb 15, 2009 21:19:29 GMT -6

okay I <3 it of course, except for one thing. The first two stanzas are all happy and nice and you get a warm feeling. And then BAM comes the third stanza and it seems to have no place there because the last 2 stanzas are all happy again. i dont get it.

I am Whisperwind, a tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes

I stay, to keep alive the memory of what once was. To make sure SoulClan is never forgotten, to honor the cats who are no more. If you are also dedicated to this cause, PM me.

sukish0friend Guest	Windspirit's Moonspirit Poetry Feb 17, 2009 20:30:22 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by sukish0friend on Feb 17, 2009 20:30:22 GMT -6 ya

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