Invasion *Story*

[.:.S.:.t.:.o.:.r.:.m.:.]

Revised Prologue;

Prologue;

Death.

Death is something I encounter everyday; something that I've grown accustomed to. Even so, I'm still terrified of it. Death is something that you're naturally born to fear, avoid. But avoiding death with this war, well that's nearly impossible.

What war is raging you ask? Well, you see, this war has been going on for years; seven, I believe, ever since I was ten. The Sun's invaded The Moon's territory, and attacked, and The Moon's retaliated by bombing The Sun Kingdom. Ever since then, my kingdom, The Moon Kingdom, has been raging with The Sun Kingdom, no end in sight.

So life isn't too great right now, but hey, it's better than being dead, right?



*Well, I decided to try to right a story, though I think it's suckish. Comments please?*

[Sweetsnow]

ooo pretty cool, but mebe get some diff names. in my opinion its not rl origional to go with Dark and Light. mebe somthing that stands for dark and light? just a suggestion. but it is pretty good(ure story)

[.:.S.:.t.:.o.:.r.:.m.:.]

Thanks. And I'll think of something other than Dark and Light.

[Sweetsnow]

np

[Golden /~/ Shatter]

I really like that, I love openers like this!

And when u find other names, u could like twist it around and make the Dark Kingdom the good guys and light evil, cuz that hardly EVER happens

[Sweetsnow]

oooo good idea Goldenkit!

[.:.S.:.t.:.o.:.r.:.m.:.]

That IS a good idea. *Steals secretly* XD

[Sweetsnow]

lol

[Golden /~/ Shatter]

Thanks I've always wanted to read/write a story like that!

[Sweetsnow]

XD

[~.:Whisper:.~]

very good beginning!! Like goldenkit, I love openings like this. It always grabs your attention and makes you want to read more. XD great job! and I agree with the names

[♥S.C.O.U.T.♥]

Maybe I should post another story Wind's writing but stopped. And she says she'll write more of Soul later.

[♥S.C.O.U.T.♥]

And amazing beginning Stormkit

[silverleaf]

I like it, but maybe a bit longer? xD You know, like in the proluge to Warriors at the beginnin is a few pages... xD

[.:.S.:.t.:.o.:.r.:.m.:.]

Thanks everyone! I changed the names of "Dark" and "Light" because that's really original, so I'll be posting the new prologue soon.


*Edit; Okay, I posted it. I revised it through the first post so... *

[blackclaw]

(i think its good)

[.:.S.:.t.:.o.:.r.:.m.:.]

Thanksies. ;D