Bum bum buuuuummmmm(Sweetsnow gets Blackcough)

[Sweetsnow]

Sweetsnow walks around in the forest, sniffing for prey. She felt achey like she slept badly. She hoped a hunt would warm her up. Catching the sent of vole she hungerly set off after it. She creeped up behind it, her legs were starting to shake. What was wrong with her today?

[Sweetsnow]

trying to shake off an odd sensation, she creeped closer. she braced herself and lept at the vole. her legs suddenly gave out as she was about to jump and she crashed to the ground pitifully. doing her best to scramble after the vole she barely got her self off the ground. the volde scurried away and her legs gave out again. she fell on her side with an odd, almost hollow, thud. her head smacking against a nearby tree's root. what is wrong with me?! she thought as the blackness of unconsousness crashed over her like an ocean wave.

[Sweetsnow]

her still body twitched as she faught to wake up. she was swimming in blackness, unable to reach the surface and the light. her breathing shallowed to almost nothing. she'd live but anyone who saw her might think she was dead.

[Sweetsnow]

she moaned inwardly, she wasnt gonna make it. she was sinking into the blackness. finaly her inward struggle stopped, and her consous mind slipped into the black waters of unconsousness. her mind went blank as if she were sleeping, none could tell when she would awake.(that is if somone where there too lol)

[Golden /~/ Shatter]

Goldenpaw was walking the borders, trying to scent for any DeathClan cats. Her eyes scanned the forest, until she came upon the scent of another SoulClan cat. Who could that be? She turned a corner until she saw a cat lying on their side in the bushes, and her heart jumped. Oh no! Quickly, Goldenpaw sprinted to the cats side, sliding to a stop. "Sweetsnow? Sweetsnow! It's me, Goldenpaw, wake up!" She nudged the warrior with her nose, but the cat didn't move. She turned and shouted in the direction of camp. "Help! I need a medicine cat!" She turned back to Sweetsnow, unsure. What do I do?

[Sweetsnow]

*hears a voice, it sounds vaugely familiar but she couldnt figure out what. the blackness was easing, she was trying to force her way through to the surface, to the light, but she was to tired. all she wanted to do was sleep forever, but she knew she couldnt. if she did, she could feel in the bottom of her heart that she'd surely die. no, the darkness wouldnt win. but it would take a while*

[~SkyPaw~]

~runs up when she hears the call, gasps~ Sweetsnow....~hurrys to pick her up throwing her over her shoulder dragging her carefully along~

[Sweetsnow]

(im not fat but arnt i to heavey for just you to carry? afterall your still an apprentice, i dont wanna break your back)

[Sweetsnow]

*she moans audiably at the sudden change, she was still trapped in the ocean of blackness but it suddenly swished around, throwing her from side to side in its black waves*

[Sweetsnow]

(haha i have four gotstoppers under my upper lip, its really odd feeling an i bet it looks funny XD)

[Sweetsnow]

(haha it does look funny, it makes me laugh wich makes me smile but it hurts to smile cuz their still under my upper lip XD i know im a dork, im darned proud of it too!)

[~SkyPaw~]

((XD ok.... and im like dragging you not careing you, your like leaning on me))

[Sweetsnow]

(how can i lean if i am not physicaly consous? XD lol)
*she keeps padling away, trying to use her strong hindlegs to help her reach the surface, she could tell she didnt have much time left, but she could also feel she was getting closer. the blackness was losing, she was around three-quarters to the light and surface. she grins in her mind, but since she is so close to the surface, her body grins as well*

[~SkyPaw~]

~manages to bring her to the med cat den, she lays sweetsnow in a scoop in the ground filled with moss~ Swwet snow ~ she almost cries~ I think you have the sickness

[Sweetsnow]

(and my reaction to it is pretty dramatic XD)
*she head another voice, different from the one before....Skypaw? Yes! she could tell who it was! she couldnt make out the words though. she grinned a bigger grin, in mind and body. she was so close so could..well, hear it*

[~SkyPaw~]

Sweetsnow! come on sweetsnow wake up! please wake up....

[Sweetsnow]

(i know you've been told not to go through the tunnel to the light, but this time you damn better!!! LOL XD)
*her body twitches, and her paws start moving a little, but enough to look like she was swimming in a dream*

[Sweetsnow]

*finaly her head bursts above the waves of the darkness, she started sinking downward, the level of the dark waves was going down. it had lost and it was retreating.*

[Sweetsnow]

*soon she was standing in her mind, all the darkness had gone. then she could see. it was the black of having your eyes closed, she opend her eyes and moaned. she felt horrible. like she acualy had done all that work*

[Clemence]

((hmm...not to ruin the fun or anything, but technically, the journey is over and the sickness has been cured...))