Post by hazelstrike on Mar 14, 2009 23:20:28 GMT -6
What you need to know before you read.
The girl as a un-curable sickness, and she has onily told a few people that she trusts. In the story, the dude she makes out with is her teacher, so, go forbbiden fruits! >.< Any ways, this stupid little jerk-off of a story wouldent let me write any thing, and it yelled at me to write it, so here we are. And no, none of the names are real, you can tell that from the last names >.< Plz read and telll me what you think. Ok. I've annoyed you enough. Oh, and there are two endings,the first one is the sad one, and the second is the happy. ok.
Hazelstrike~~~~~
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The girl stumbled into an empty class room, coughing harshly. Her body heaved with the harsh force of air in and out of her windpipe. Someone shifted there weight in the room, and the girl hears this, wants to look, but cant, she's into much pain. She can feel the thought start to bleed, and flecks of blood sprinkle on the had thats covering her mouth. Finally, thank you God, Finally, the coughing stops.
She stands there gasping for breath until some one moves there weight again, and she looks up in alarm, wondering who had seen her. No one could see how truly sick she was. No one.
She turns to the tall shadow in the middle of the room. 'how could I have not seen that!?' She thinks to her self. Her gray eyes are still watery with the tears from her latest cough-a-thon. She moves her raven black hair out of the way, which is cut to a messy just-a-few-more-inches-than-shoulder-length, and has a few light streaks of light black. She quietly moves to the shadow, wondering desperately how to fix her new problem.
“I had no idea that it was that bad. You should have told me.”
The girl stops in mid step, her eyes widening at the familiar voice. Two thin,strong arms wrap around her smaller frame, pulling her close to his larger one. Her head rests ageist his chest, her eyes tired and sad.
She tries to pull away, but her holds her to him. He's tall for an adult, and she's tall for a 17 year old. You could say they match. His feature are still hidden in the shadows, but the girl know them by heart, as sad as that sounds. She knows his hair is a light dirty blond,a bit messy, is nose is a straight, and his eyes,oh, his eyes. She has no Idea what color they are, because if he wears any thing that looks like green, or is close to it, his eyes were an amazing shade of green. If he wore blue his eyes were that. And If he wore white, his eyes were gray, just like hers. She loves it when he wears white.
“Did you see that all?” Her voice is rough and raged, thanks to her coughing, and she quickly clears it. “Yeah,” He says quietly, his voice sad to see her in such pain,”Yeah , I did.”
She sighs. “I'm very sorry. Forgive me for disturbing you.”She moves to pull away, but he holds her to him, not allowing her to move. Suddenly he brings her lips down to hers, and he kisses her.
She moans into the kiss, tiling her head to deepen it. They break apart for air, staring at each other with wide eyes.
“How long have you loved me?” He asks, getting straight to the point. She blushes, looking ashamed of her self. He holds her gently, smiling at her in encouragement.
“I'm not sure. It just...happed. ” He closes his eyes as if this makes him happy. Maybe it dose.
“I think I love you to. So you need to either get medical help for your sickness, or come to live with me, where I can take care of you.”
She smiles gently at him, like a parent at a child when they get naive, when they don't under stand what will really happen, when they don't understand that there is no such thing as happy endings.
“ I'm going to die. If the sickness doest take me, I'll do it myself. I'm tired of this....just existing. ”
She's glad she can tell someone. She could always trust him. She pulls away before he can regain himself. She smiles at him before leaving the room. The smile was not a happy one. It said goodbye,I'm sorry, and I love you. He stands there for a few more seconds before running after her. Shes gone. And he knows he's to late.
The chat room:
Black_wolf132: ….....
Black_wolf's_mate133: The hell! You arnt really going to kill your self are you!?
Black_wolf132: Yes. Im tired of this. Im so sorry. I love you.
~Black_wolf132 has sent Black_wolfs_mate133 a picture.~
~Back_wolf132 has logged off~
News Paper:
Girl found dead in room. Suicide
The body of a high school girl has been found in her room, a shot gun in hand when found. The reasons for the suicide are unknown, and the girl had a fairly happy life. She had been popular, had good grades and was loved. Cointues on pg A16.
ENDING 1!!!
The teacher stared at the newspaper in his hand, feeling sick. “Umm... Jordan?Are you ok?” The female teacher beside him, Ms McDonald, Emily, looks at him with worry. Tears are in her eyes at the news at her students demise. Mr .Slife answers her. “No. Im leaving. Goodbye.” He abruptly stands up, grabbing is coat on the way out. He walks though the heavy wooden doors of his school. He gives it a last look. Shaking slightly, her gets into his car and drives to his apartment, where he had hoped the now dead student would live once she had come of age. 'No chance now. Only one way to ever see her again.' He gets out the hand gun he always keeps in the lockable drawer in his desk. He quickly signs a note, telling them why he was dong this. He makes sure the guns loaded. It is.
He brings the barrel of the gun to his mouth, not daring to thank about the look she would have given him if she knew he was doing this for her. 'When did I fall for her so hard that I don't see a point of living if she's not here?' He dosent think on it. He prays for Gods forgiveness before he shots. He falls to the floor, his eyes glassy. His eyes are gray, because he's wearing white today.
ENDING 2!!!!
Jordan looks at the happy girl at his side. Her black hair wips around her face in the wind as they speed down the old farm road. She had turned 18 yesterday day, and had moved out with him as soon as the clock had struck midnight. They had been waiting for this for ever. Her eyes are a silvery gray, like his got when he wore white.
“Jordan, do you really have a house all the way out here?” She asks him for the billionth time. He dosent mind. “Yeah, I do, Love.”She grins at him, the cleaner air helping her breather better.
He remembers the day when he had though she was dead. He had had the gun in his mouth, ad was bout to kill himself, ( 'When did I fall so in love with her', He was asking him self, 'So much that I cant live with out her?') There had suddenly been a large amount of banging on his door, and he opened it out of habbet. She had flung her self on him, knocking him off balance and scening them both to the floor. She had kicked to door closed on the way down. They had both cried. Kissed. Laughed, and just been happy with each others presence. He had asked her. 'I though you were going to kill your self. Who was in the news paper? The idiots didn't put a name.....'
She had hawser him sadly.' Karen Newman. The drugs she had been taking made her a little out of it, and she decided to clean her Dady's shotgun. It went off in her face.'
Jordan pulls him self out of his memories as he sees the road they need to pull off on come up. He dosent bothers with a blinker, seeing as how they were the only ones on the whole friggen road. They pull up the long drive way, and get out of the car and look at the small cabin like house in front of them.
He kisses her, and gray eyes meet gray. His eyes are gray, her favorite, because he's wearing white today.
The girl as a un-curable sickness, and she has onily told a few people that she trusts. In the story, the dude she makes out with is her teacher, so, go forbbiden fruits! >.< Any ways, this stupid little jerk-off of a story wouldent let me write any thing, and it yelled at me to write it, so here we are. And no, none of the names are real, you can tell that from the last names >.< Plz read and telll me what you think. Ok. I've annoyed you enough. Oh, and there are two endings,the first one is the sad one, and the second is the happy. ok.
Hazelstrike~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The girl stumbled into an empty class room, coughing harshly. Her body heaved with the harsh force of air in and out of her windpipe. Someone shifted there weight in the room, and the girl hears this, wants to look, but cant, she's into much pain. She can feel the thought start to bleed, and flecks of blood sprinkle on the had thats covering her mouth. Finally, thank you God, Finally, the coughing stops.
She stands there gasping for breath until some one moves there weight again, and she looks up in alarm, wondering who had seen her. No one could see how truly sick she was. No one.
She turns to the tall shadow in the middle of the room. 'how could I have not seen that!?' She thinks to her self. Her gray eyes are still watery with the tears from her latest cough-a-thon. She moves her raven black hair out of the way, which is cut to a messy just-a-few-more-inches-than-shoulder-length, and has a few light streaks of light black. She quietly moves to the shadow, wondering desperately how to fix her new problem.
“I had no idea that it was that bad. You should have told me.”
The girl stops in mid step, her eyes widening at the familiar voice. Two thin,strong arms wrap around her smaller frame, pulling her close to his larger one. Her head rests ageist his chest, her eyes tired and sad.
She tries to pull away, but her holds her to him. He's tall for an adult, and she's tall for a 17 year old. You could say they match. His feature are still hidden in the shadows, but the girl know them by heart, as sad as that sounds. She knows his hair is a light dirty blond,a bit messy, is nose is a straight, and his eyes,oh, his eyes. She has no Idea what color they are, because if he wears any thing that looks like green, or is close to it, his eyes were an amazing shade of green. If he wore blue his eyes were that. And If he wore white, his eyes were gray, just like hers. She loves it when he wears white.
“Did you see that all?” Her voice is rough and raged, thanks to her coughing, and she quickly clears it. “Yeah,” He says quietly, his voice sad to see her in such pain,”Yeah , I did.”
She sighs. “I'm very sorry. Forgive me for disturbing you.”She moves to pull away, but he holds her to him, not allowing her to move. Suddenly he brings her lips down to hers, and he kisses her.
She moans into the kiss, tiling her head to deepen it. They break apart for air, staring at each other with wide eyes.
“How long have you loved me?” He asks, getting straight to the point. She blushes, looking ashamed of her self. He holds her gently, smiling at her in encouragement.
“I'm not sure. It just...happed. ” He closes his eyes as if this makes him happy. Maybe it dose.
“I think I love you to. So you need to either get medical help for your sickness, or come to live with me, where I can take care of you.”
She smiles gently at him, like a parent at a child when they get naive, when they don't under stand what will really happen, when they don't understand that there is no such thing as happy endings.
“ I'm going to die. If the sickness doest take me, I'll do it myself. I'm tired of this....just existing. ”
She's glad she can tell someone. She could always trust him. She pulls away before he can regain himself. She smiles at him before leaving the room. The smile was not a happy one. It said goodbye,I'm sorry, and I love you. He stands there for a few more seconds before running after her. Shes gone. And he knows he's to late.
The chat room:
Black_wolf132: ….....
Black_wolf's_mate133: The hell! You arnt really going to kill your self are you!?
Black_wolf132: Yes. Im tired of this. Im so sorry. I love you.
~Black_wolf132 has sent Black_wolfs_mate133 a picture.~
~Back_wolf132 has logged off~
News Paper:
Girl found dead in room. Suicide
The body of a high school girl has been found in her room, a shot gun in hand when found. The reasons for the suicide are unknown, and the girl had a fairly happy life. She had been popular, had good grades and was loved. Cointues on pg A16.
ENDING 1!!!
The teacher stared at the newspaper in his hand, feeling sick. “Umm... Jordan?Are you ok?” The female teacher beside him, Ms McDonald, Emily, looks at him with worry. Tears are in her eyes at the news at her students demise. Mr .Slife answers her. “No. Im leaving. Goodbye.” He abruptly stands up, grabbing is coat on the way out. He walks though the heavy wooden doors of his school. He gives it a last look. Shaking slightly, her gets into his car and drives to his apartment, where he had hoped the now dead student would live once she had come of age. 'No chance now. Only one way to ever see her again.' He gets out the hand gun he always keeps in the lockable drawer in his desk. He quickly signs a note, telling them why he was dong this. He makes sure the guns loaded. It is.
He brings the barrel of the gun to his mouth, not daring to thank about the look she would have given him if she knew he was doing this for her. 'When did I fall for her so hard that I don't see a point of living if she's not here?' He dosent think on it. He prays for Gods forgiveness before he shots. He falls to the floor, his eyes glassy. His eyes are gray, because he's wearing white today.
ENDING 2!!!!
Jordan looks at the happy girl at his side. Her black hair wips around her face in the wind as they speed down the old farm road. She had turned 18 yesterday day, and had moved out with him as soon as the clock had struck midnight. They had been waiting for this for ever. Her eyes are a silvery gray, like his got when he wore white.
“Jordan, do you really have a house all the way out here?” She asks him for the billionth time. He dosent mind. “Yeah, I do, Love.”She grins at him, the cleaner air helping her breather better.
He remembers the day when he had though she was dead. He had had the gun in his mouth, ad was bout to kill himself, ( 'When did I fall so in love with her', He was asking him self, 'So much that I cant live with out her?') There had suddenly been a large amount of banging on his door, and he opened it out of habbet. She had flung her self on him, knocking him off balance and scening them both to the floor. She had kicked to door closed on the way down. They had both cried. Kissed. Laughed, and just been happy with each others presence. He had asked her. 'I though you were going to kill your self. Who was in the news paper? The idiots didn't put a name.....'
She had hawser him sadly.' Karen Newman. The drugs she had been taking made her a little out of it, and she decided to clean her Dady's shotgun. It went off in her face.'
Jordan pulls him self out of his memories as he sees the road they need to pull off on come up. He dosent bothers with a blinker, seeing as how they were the only ones on the whole friggen road. They pull up the long drive way, and get out of the car and look at the small cabin like house in front of them.
He kisses her, and gray eyes meet gray. His eyes are gray, her favorite, because he's wearing white today.
