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Post by spottedpaw on Jan 5, 2009 14:48:01 GMT -6
"Ashpaw...B-brindlepaw...Are you two...ok..?" she whispered hoarsly. She staggered to her feet and gazed at the limp bodies, fear devouring her mind.
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Post by brindlekit on Jan 5, 2009 14:49:08 GMT -6
*Brindlepaw laid limp... but she felt as if someone were saying shes was going to ok.... but the words drifted as she was still unable to breath much air in*
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Post by ashpaw on Jan 5, 2009 14:50:46 GMT -6
*Ashpaw kept thinking his thought untill he coughed up water* *He started to breathe faintly*
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Post by spottedpaw on Jan 5, 2009 14:51:30 GMT -6
Finally snapping out of the fear of losing them both, she got to work pumping the water out of their throats. "Come on...Come on..." she whispered as she pressed against Brindlepaw's throat. Brindlepaw started choking up water and so Spottedpaw moved to Ashpaw. "Come on Ashpaw..Its ok...Come on...breath!" she mewled until he finally choked up water.
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Post by ashpaw on Jan 5, 2009 14:52:38 GMT -6
*Starts to breathe though it's still uneven*
"Brindlepaw.." He whispered. "Is...Is she okay?"
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Post by brindlekit on Jan 5, 2009 14:53:09 GMT -6
*Starts breathing... but she felt frozen ans stiff as if Starclan had planned to let this be her burial place...*
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Post by ashpaw on Jan 5, 2009 14:55:24 GMT -6
*Starts shivvering* *weakily pulls his head up and sees Brindlepaw* *Crawls over to her and rests his tail on her side*
You're going to be okay... *He whimpered.* *His ears pinned back, her layed his head on her side*
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Post by spottedpaw on Jan 5, 2009 14:57:09 GMT -6
"Yes...I think she is...Ashpaw.." she mewed and turned to Brindlepaw. Brindlepaw lay so still that it made Spottedpaw's heart skip. She couldnt tell Ashpaw this. "Brindlepaw..Come on...its not over yet...theres still a long time to go...Come on, its ok...!" she whispered on the verge of tears. She pressed onto her chest again. StarClan....Please....N-not now...Please not now....She still has more time...Please StarClan...
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Post by ashpaw on Jan 5, 2009 14:58:46 GMT -6
*closes his eyes as he starts to cry* Please don't go...
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Post by brindlekit on Jan 5, 2009 15:00:33 GMT -6
*Starts breathing faster and finally chokes up water... eyes slowly open. Sees Spottedpaw* S-Spottedpaw....? *Sees Ashpaw* A-Ashpaw.... are you.... ok...?
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Post by spottedpaw on Jan 5, 2009 15:01:26 GMT -6
She pressed harder. She wouldnt let Ashpaw lose something so presious. What else can I do..?! "Brindlepaw, flick your tail if you can hear me!" she mewed loudly.
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Post by ashpaw on Jan 5, 2009 15:01:54 GMT -6
*Gasps and smiles* Brindlepaw! You're okay! *Purrs*
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Post by spottedpaw on Jan 5, 2009 15:02:34 GMT -6
Her eyes widened. "Brindlepaw. How do you feel?!" she meowed.
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Post by brindlekit on Jan 5, 2009 15:03:09 GMT -6
*Flicks tail and looks at them both still coughing up water* Of.... course.... Im not going just yet.....
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Post by spottedpaw on Jan 5, 2009 15:04:10 GMT -6
Spottedpaw smiled at Brindlepaw. "Ashpaw, are you strong enough to help me get her back to camp?"
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Post by brindlekit on Jan 5, 2009 15:04:32 GMT -6
*Staggers to get to paws, fur so drenched it became heavy to carry. Falls on the ground once again, then tries to stand once more...* I-I think..... im.... ok.....
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Post by ashpaw on Jan 5, 2009 15:04:52 GMT -6
*Licks inbetween her ears* *Nuzzles her gently* I thought you were dead...
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Post by spottedpaw on Jan 5, 2009 15:05:58 GMT -6
"But we still have to help you...Theres no way...you'd be able to make it back to camp; you're too weak..." she whsipered and licked Brindlepaw's ear.
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Post by brindlekit on Jan 5, 2009 15:06:19 GMT -6
*Attempts to nod... still not able to stand at the moment* I-Im fine..... ewven though... *Coughs up water once more*
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Post by brindlekit on Jan 5, 2009 15:06:41 GMT -6
*Looks add Spottedpaw and nods* Ok...
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Dec 30, 2015 19:31:53 GMT -6
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