|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 14:06:37 GMT -6
Ok, so I need to write a poem for school cuz my mom wants to make me start poetry. The poem is due April 1st, and I need ideas. This is what I have so far.
In the glow of the moonlight,
a wolf always sings,
its call echoing through the forest.
Children sleep,
dreaming sweet dreams,
and breathing peacefully.
The moon glows bright,
shining bright off of pools of water.
I know it kinda sucks but I just came up wit it three seconds ago...
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 14:11:01 GMT -6
WOw i re-read it and it really sucks compared to some of the things Ive wrote before......
|
|
|
|
Post by ~.:Whisper:.~ on Feb 14, 2009 14:13:29 GMT -6
I love the first part of it.
"In the glow of the moonlight,
a wolf always sings,
its call echoing through the forest."
I think you should go more with that. Talk about wolves, their howls, their freedom, the forest, the night...
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 14:14:39 GMT -6
oki. ooo I like dat idea.. Im starting to hear words in meh head that will work... I know wht I just said kinda sounds weird, but it always happens when I write poetry or write a story
|
|
|
|
Post by ~.:Whisper:.~ on Feb 14, 2009 14:28:01 GMT -6
Oh for sure. It happens to everyone...that's how I write Tigerlilies.
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 14:35:27 GMT -6
i hear an elf telling meh the words tho o.O
|
|
|
|
Post by ~.:Whisper:.~ on Feb 14, 2009 14:42:12 GMT -6
lol okay maybe that doesn't happen to me.
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 14:42:45 GMT -6
lol! xD
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 15:17:12 GMT -6
IM DONE!!! TELL ME WHT YALL THINK!!!! Pride of the Wolf
In the glow of the moonlightm
A wolf always sings,
Its call echoing through the forest,
Breaking all silence.
Its eyes peice the darkness,
Watching all the creatures of the night,
Planning their demise.
Free of spirit, body, and soul,
To their heart there is no key,
Captured by nothing, nothing at all,
Never to be tamed.
They roam the wild country,
They're beatuiful, mysterious eyes glowing,
Side by side they hunt,
Shadows dancing in the northern skies.
Their eyes hold the ghost of their ancestors,
That roamed once before,
Strength, courage, and grace,
They are to the core.
Their silent paws trot,
On well beaten path,
Alone in the wilderness,
Forever to last.
Finally they will disappear,
Away from cities,
Away from Man,
Forever they will stay silent.
Forever... Forever... |
|
|
|
Post by moonkit on Feb 14, 2009 15:17:21 GMT -6
teeeheeeheee*thinks*(MWAHAHAHA)
|
|
|
|
Post by Clemence on Feb 14, 2009 15:19:38 GMT -6
ZOMG! tht iz AM-AZING!
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 15:20:28 GMT -6
Hehe ;D I WORKED HHAARRDD ON IT!!!! I READ LIKE, 10 WOLF PEOSM FOR INCPERATION!!!!!!!! (sp?)
|
|
|
|
Post by Clemence on Feb 14, 2009 15:21:42 GMT -6
AWSUM!!!!!!
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 15:27:40 GMT -6
This poem was the hardest, best, and quickest thing i have EVER written.
|
|
|
|
Post by moonkit on Feb 14, 2009 15:29:27 GMT -6
YAY SH4U
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 15:31:51 GMT -6
whts SH4U?
|
|
|
|
Post by moonkit on Feb 14, 2009 15:33:25 GMT -6
i esplained
|
|
|
|
Post by silverleaf on Feb 14, 2009 15:46:55 GMT -6
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
|
|
|
|
Post by moonkit on Feb 14, 2009 15:51:26 GMT -6
*SINGS WAIT 4 U AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS*IVE NEVER FELT NOTHING IN THE WORLD LIKE THIS BEFORE NOW IM MISSING U AND & IM WISHIN U WOULD COME BACK THRU MY DOOR WHY DID U HAVE TO GO?COULD HAVE LET ME KNOW SO NOW IM ALL ALONE
|
|
|
|
Post by moonkit on Feb 14, 2009 15:54:39 GMT -6
GIRL U COULD HAVE STAYED BUT U DIDNT GIVE ME A CHANCE
WITH U NOT AROUND ITS A LITTLE BIT MORE THAN I CAN STAND
AND ALL THESE TEARS THEY KEEP RUNNING DOWN MY FACE
WHY DID U TURN AWAY
|
|
